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Onca32: /* Grammatical and syntax improvement */

2014-05-07T10:16:02Z

Grammatical and syntax improvement

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	Content is adequate, I'm just going to fix some grammatical errors. Clean up the English a bit. Hope everyones ok with that --[[User:Onca32\|Onca32]] ([[User talk:Onca32\|talk]]) 11:29, 7 May 2014 (CEST)		Content is adequate, I'm just going to fix some grammatical errors. Clean up the English a bit. Hope everyones ok with that --[[User:Onca32\|Onca32]] ([[User talk:Onca32\|talk]]) 11:29, 7 May 2014 (CEST)
			:I removed the paragraph about belt transport in the introduction section. It seems a bit redundant to have that when belts are discussed in the next section. Also why talk about rail systems without expanding in this article? I added a link to the rail system in the "see also" section. --[[User:Onca32\|Onca32]] ([[User talk:Onca32\|talk]])
			::I didn't want to change major things, but I don't think we really need to talk about how stacks work. Its a major concept of pretty much any video game with an inventory system, and players are going to pretty much know about it since your inventory is like that. Its good to have a separate article on stacks, but unnecessary to explore it in this section specifically. --[[User:Onca32\|Onca32]] ([[User talk:Onca32\|talk]]) 12:16, 7 May 2014 (CEST)

			=="Storage" and "other entities with stacks"==
			I recommend we remove the sections completely and incorporate them into the rest of the article. The storage section can be added to the chests section, since it is literally the same thing. Other entities and rail systems should be in the see also section, or a new section about optimisation strategies. --[[User:Onca32\|Onca32]] ([[User talk:Onca32\|talk]]) 12:16, 7 May 2014 (CEST)

Onca32: /* Grammatical and syntax improvement */

2014-05-07T09:29:57Z

Grammatical and syntax improvement

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	Content is adequate, I'm just going to fix some grammatical errors. Clean up the English a bit. Hope everyones ok with that --[[User:Onca32\|Onca32]] ([[User talk:Onca32\|talk]])		Content is adequate, I'm just going to fix some grammatical errors. Clean up the English a bit. Hope everyones ok with that --[[User:Onca32\|Onca32]] ([[User talk:Onca32\|talk]]) 11:29, 7 May 2014 (CEST)

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2014-05-07T09:29:08Z

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==Grammatical and syntax improvement==
Content is adequate, I'm just going to fix some grammatical errors. Clean up the English a bit. Hope everyones ok with that --[[User:Onca32|Onca32]] ([[User talk:Onca32|talk]])